Sa pagtipa at pagpuna

ang pagsusulat ay maihahalintulad sa pagluluto.kelangan ang mabusising pagpili ng mga sangkap(tamang pagbaybay, istraktura, gramatika, balarila, atbp) mula sa Pamilihan ng Salita para mas maging malasa ang anumang ihahain sa mambabasa. sa pamamalengke ng salita, hindi pwedeng "pwede na", walang puwang ang tsambahang pagpili ng salita. at pag naisaayos na ang lahat..ang resulta: isang putaheng malasa, masarap at tunay na babalikbalikan .


para sa mga alipin ng salita, isang pagpupugay!


-Professor Gladys Serafica, Wordslave Monologue

Para sa isang manunulat, isang mahalagang bagay ang mga puna ng mambabasa. Dahil sa huli, ito ang magsasabi kung hanggang saan na ang narating mo, at kung ano pa ang mga bagay na dapat mong isaayos.

Kaya naman sa ikapitong buwan kong pamamalagi rito sa blogasperyo, aking ilalathala ang mga kumentong di lamang naging mahalaga para sa akin, kung di ang mga bagay na nagpangiti na rin sa akin, at sa inyo.

its me., elijah.. from friendster

Well, I suppose i can call myself a critic,. If u don’t mind, I speculated all your blogs

I saw and elaborated all ur postings and compared them with my outlook. I’m enlightened that there are still sense-imbued people in the society. by the way majority of your pieces of writing are truly captivating. Furthermore, these people im being particular with are none but youth. Rizal once said, youth are the hope of the nation, well as far as I’ve perceived preponderance of the youth aren’t doing well. It brighten up my day to see your prospects logically and philosophically factual.. I love all of it.

-ELIJAH, Define Friendster Profile

Si Elijah ay isang ring estudyante sa peryodismo. At nakakatuwang isipin na dahil sa akin ay nagsimula rin siya ng isang blog.

Hi. Got your link from a friend, your ideas gave me a jumpstart on a segment I am working on.
This will be aired in GMA7 on Saturday.
You have good ideas, keep it up.
Is it ok if I'm gonna link you to my blog?
Thanks.

-LENGGAI, Define Friendster Profile

Natuwa ako nang mabasa ko itong comment ni PinayBrodkaster, sa iyo, maraming salamat.

Kudos kid, that porker needs to keep her mouth shut. It's her job to broadcast factual information about this subject matter. Yes, I am deep and cold anger. Thank you for bringing that up, For God sakes! They didn't have the intellect to interview reliable sources, only attention whores, hell Fugazi wasn't even mentioned. Shame on her, what a dumb fat C---T!!


xxx
1/3 of the Moderators
P.E.S.O.S

-Philippine Emo Scene Online Society, Jessica Soho is Emo

At pati mga komunidad/grupo sa www ay naapektuhan sa ulat ni Jessica Soho ukol sa emo.

Ano pa kaya ang mga ANONYMOUS?
bonggang-bongga ka ngang talaga!
mahusay kang talaga at iyan ang iyong kalakasan
subalit sa likod ng iyong bonggang-bongga mong mga katangian
ay may nakakubling kahinaan
marahil
ito'y pansin dili ng iba
subalit ito'y pansin ko
dama ko
hindi mo ito ikinukubli
subalit dili mong inilalabas
napakadali ang pagtanggi
at napakahirap ng pag-amin

ipagpatuloy ang mga mabubuting gawi at iwaksi ang makasasama sa iba at sa iyong sarili

--suki

di ko alam kung san pa pwede magiwan ng kumento.

at fan ka pa pala ng kule. *tawa*

tungkol ito sa pinost mo sa isa pang site. gusto ko lang itanong, kung hindi mo schoolmate si janina, pareho pa rn kaya ang reaksyon mo? tanong lang naman.

nagmamahal, ang iyong kinamumuhiang si ANONYMOUS.

-Anonymous, Silang mga di makuntento

oo. totoo ang hirap na ito. sino nga bang makapagpapatotoo sa dilemang ito? tanging ang mga walang muwang na mag-aaral ng bagong nayon II na patuloy na nakikipagniig sa nakapanlulumong sitwasyong ito. sila'y mga batang nagnanais ng kaginhawaang tila hindi maaabot sa kalagayang ito. marami sa kanila ang umaasa. Karamihan sa kanila'y bumabagsak sa mga asignatura dahil na rin sa mga problemang hindi naman sila ang may lalang.
Problema sa tahanan
sila ba ang may sala? hindi. Kasalanan ba nilang magkaroon ng di pagkakaunawan ang kanilang puno?at maging mahirap?
Problema sa paaralan
kasalanan ba nilang mawalan ng silid? ng aklat? na sa bandang huli'y magiging sanhi ng kawalan ng interes? at pagkatapos ay ang walang katapusang pag-ulit ng taon na hindi malaman kung kailan nga ba papasa?
ang mga sakit sa ulong ito'y hindi naman kasalanan ng mga mag-aarala subalit patuloy nila itong pasan. naisin mang magreklamo, ay wala namang tutunghan.
Naisin mang sumigaw upang ilabas ang kanilang mga hinaing ay tila nabubusalan ito ng isang tapong nabubulok na tumutulong upang mapinid sa kawalan ang mga kaawa-awang mag-aaral.
(hindi ako marunong gumawa sarili kong blog. subalit nalalaman kong darating din ang panahon ng aking pagkatuto. sana'y makasabay ako sa'yo. ganda mo 'day)
--christian jay
(ako rin yung nagcomment at nagkwento tungkol sa aking ina na nagtext sa pinakamamahal naming erpats)
'musta naman 'yun?
hehehe sana makilala mo ako

-Anonymous, Pagsasagwan sa Kabuktutan at Pagkukulang

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Sa aking tala, hindi pa ito ang pinakamahabang kumento. Mamaya mawiwindang na kayo.

kaya walang nangyayari sa pinas e.. hehehe... owell, im not pro government, kasi corrupt naman sila, so sana magstart ang disiplina sa mga pinoy... so pro filipino ako e. pero i dont think majujustify mo na okay bumili sa mga pirata... "the end does not justify the means" ika nga... sana matutunan pa din nating bumili at gumamit ng mga original na gamit. hindi dahilan ang kahirapan...

-Dack, Ang Tunay na kontrabida

At hindi rin naman mawawala ang hindi pagsang-ayon.

1. Ano ba ang cono?Bawal na bang mag-salita ng Ingles? Marunong kang magsulat ng Ingles,umintindi ng Ingles at bumasa ng Ingles. Bakit ka tatawaging cono kung isasalita mo ang natutunan mo?

2. Sayang ang espasyo sa world wide web.Hindi maganda itong article mo.

3. Speedy recovery for your sibling
A true critic is not afraid to be criticized.
PUN INTENDED.

-Anino, theCritic and the Conyo: A conversation

At may pahabol pa po si Anino. Haha

Bias nga sa palagay ko.Katulad din nitong isinulat mo.Inisa-isa mo ang mga nasa 24 oras.Samantalang ang sa TV Patrol, ilang pangungusap lang.

-Anino, Tagibang na Pamamahayag

Salamat at hindi naman umabot sa patayan ang maliit naming sagutan ni Anino. :) Friend na kami niyan.

Sino ba namang hindi makakalimot sa pagkakamali ko?

It costed me a hundred bucks.
The past tense of cost is still cost. Stupid is as stupid does. Precisely.

-Anonymous, Stupid is as stupid does

Ngayon alam ko na ang past tense ng COST ay COST pa rin :D

At ang mga pagtutunggali ng ideya.

nkakapagod na iyan.

it's not our war.

sa laban ng mga malalaking kapitalista, tao ang mananaig. sa ganoong perspektibo nalang natin tignan. the "media" is dstroying itslf, matutuwa si adorno at horkheimer (ganito ba spell nun?) nito. hahaha.

let them be.

-Carl, Decadence of Credibility

i'm sorry but i have to disagree with carl on this. actually it is our war, at least we are part of it. you see everthing's connected, we are all connected whether we like it or not. kaya apektado pa rin tayo in a way. it may not be that obvious but i do believe it does affect all of us. hehe, ang labo ko.

-Arjay, Decadence of Credibility

i admire men who are not afraid to show their emotions. for me that is more the real meaning of masculinity, the courage to show your real feelings...

very well written!

kudos!

-Wandering Commuter, Superman Syndrome

Papuri mula sa isang institusyon. Hahahah

At ang mga uber affected sa Psycho killer.

errr. listekk na psycho killer yan! xinira nea pamumuhay ko! lol. what i mean is ayun. ndi na ko makagala, makalaboy, makagala, at mkalaboy dhil xa knya. deym! i hate him so much! xDDDD

-Anonymous

how weird this DEnnis GARCia!

he's doing such inhumane things...

media shud warn d people bout this...

GOV'T AUTHORITIES!!!!!!
wake up!!! DO SOMETHING...

we dont know hu'll be d nxt victim???

PRAY!
PRAY!
PRAY!

dats all we can do....

-Blue Diamond

hinde ba halatang parehong angle ang pic niya na parang phinoto shop lang haha I DON"T BELIEVE IT!
Araw araw e dapat tayong nag iingat at hinde kung kelan may mga rumors lang ng mga killer!

-Anonymous, Psycho Killer's Killing Frenzy

At ihanda na po natin ang ating sarili sa comment ni Electric Itlog.

Actually, we already dropped from the third spot. Believe it or not, recent surveys have estimated that there are even more English speakers in India and China than those in the US and in the UK.

This issue is interesting because of the underlying philosophies involved. One of the main things we should consider is, why do we want to excel in the English language in the first place?

I don't think it's a case of simple economics. Being proficient in English doesn't really guarantee any economic boom, much like learning how to strum a guitar doesn't make you a rockstar. Yes, it is a stepping stone, but not necessarily an important one.

Japan immediately springs to mind. Although they live in one of the richest countries in the world, most Japanese can't even pronounce the word "English". Just like how one can be a member of the band without really knowing how to play instruments (i.e. some vocalists), it's also possible for a country to be prosperous without a firm fluency in the English language.

And so, why the hell do we want to excel in English in the first place?

Although I said it wasn't a case of simple economics, the answer to the question is actually a case of economics (albeit not so simple).

Many Filipinos have a very weird idea of attaining success: study hard and then get of the country. This somewhat unpatriotic view is the product of being raised with the mindset that the Philippines is a hellhole--no real success for anyone trying to get to the top. And in many cases, it really is.

Which posits the problem of language. Surely, it would be naive to think that you can attain success abroad without knowing how to read or write English like you were educated at some grammar school in Yorkshire. You have to talk the talk, so they say.

I have often heard many of my teachers lament the fact that our education is really based upon this reality. Our curriculum was created so that after graduation, we will be prepared to face the real world--which, we are unfortunately taught, resides a thousand miles beyond our country. We were prepared not so that we would be good Filipinos with decent jobs but so that we would be good Filipinos with decent jobs abroad.

"Oh really? I don't think so. I think you got it all wrong. There are many jobs here in the Philippines where proficiency in English is a must."

Yeah, right. Like I'd really want to be here in the Philippines ten years from now and see my children become fluent English speakers just so they can take calls from angry Americans asking why their cable went out. Sorry, as tempting as that may sound, I'll have to pass.

I think that we shouldn't take our low proficiency in English as a sign of our economic demise. Instead of finding ways of how to shove foreign grammar lessons into the heads of our youth, the Government should focus on how to improve our economic situation so that English won't be a necessity. I know it's idealistic in all, but we need to make the Philippines a better Filipino country. If there were enough jobs, enough opportunities for success here without the requirement of being able to write an impeccable essay in English or being able to deliver a speech that could give Shakespeare a run for his money, then I guess the need for learning a whole new other language wouldn't be a need anymore. Or to put it bluntly, why would I need to know how to cook risotto when all I want to do is eat some pizza?

You may think that I'm becoming a bit of a hypocrite; this lengthy response, after all, is in English. But don't get me wrong. I'm not bashing English or saying that it's worthless. Heck! I couldn't see myself being able to live a moment in my life without thinking in English.

But the truth is that I learned English not because I needed to. I didn't learn English because I wanted to spend the next years of my life doing jobs at an American law firm somewhere in California. I learned English because I wanted to. I learned English because I desired to.

And that, I suppose, is the best reason why we all should. Because for a very few reasons (this included), the want should rise above the need.

-Electric Itlog, Drastic Downfall on Philippine English Literacy

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